There are two more weeks left in the 2012 yeah write summer writer’s series—Week 6: general structure, including that pesky beginning, middle and end we’ve been talking about and Week 7: versatility and flexibility in blogging.
Once we’ve completed the series, the challenge grid will return. Although they will no longer be required by the submissions guidelines, prompts will be available for those who appreciate defined borders while writing. The maximum word limit will be increased to a hard count of 1,000 for those who were all crusty about being forced to limit their awesomeness to 500 these past few weeks.
Editor’s pick by Erica M will make its comeback and the lurking judges’ favorites will be renamed to better reflect the expanded roles of Flood, Kristin and Jen here at yeah write. Kristin and Jen’s favorites will become contributing editors’ picks and Flood, our third contributing editor, will shift from judging to moderating the grid full-time. Yes, she’s now the gatekeeper. If you bring her your best stuff with a central conflict, beginning, middle, end and your “so what”? You got 99 problems, but the grid ain’t one.
Until then…
Flood’s honorable mention
This week, I vote for Mute by Courtenay at IASoupMama. A touching story of the silent reality of miscarriage. The writing is stark, giving the reader a sense of the foggy here-but-not-really-here atmosphere the protagonist is floating through. Not one word is redundant. (Television character) The Fresh Prince witnesses the event noiselessly without losing any of his goofy demeanour. “Even in the silence, I knew what was happening.” A peek into a sad, but never overly sentimental private scene, and it was hard to look away.
Kristin’s honorable mention
Reading IASoupMama’s Mute was like intense pain as felt through layers of cheesecloth. I knew it was there —on many levels —but it didn’t chisel away at my resolve. It was told as a matter-of-fact occurrence, reflected in the nurse’s seemingly cold (but perhaps just routine) behavior. The details from beginning to end heighten the sense of the everyday. Groceries deliberately purchased despite knowing their rotting future in the car, Will Smith jumping over a couch and witnessing a private moment of loss, and the images of “life goes on” as seen through the eyes of a would-be mother and cancer survivor. I was also impressed with the ability of the main character to hold a conversation without saying a word.
Crowd favorite
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Thank You, Stranger by Louise at Raising Ivy demonstrated how seemingly random encounters can heavily influence our lives. In her post, we meet a younger, heavier, miserable Louise struggling to recalibrate her brain chemicals after childbirth. On one of her worst days, she is lifted by the words of a stranger, finds renewed strength, then carries the stranger’s kindness with her into perpetuity.
Much like Mamarific’s first crowd favorite win last week, Louise’s first place showing on a condensed grid is encouraging for those of us who use yeah write as a writers’ commune—celebrating the art of writing— instead of using yeah write solely as a blog traffic portal, pursuing the business of writing.
Yeah write #68 jury prize winner
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Hey there, Courtenay. Again. You swept all three editors’ first place selections this week with Mute, your moving and well-written piece. Please email me with me with your shipping address so I can send you a copy of Henriette Anne Klauser’s Writing on Both Sides of the Brain: Breakthrough Techniques for People Who Write, the jury prize selected by Flood G, this week’s guest editor. Thank you for being such a faithful part of yeah write. Congrats.
Win-Win
The thumbnails are now sorted in the grid from most yellow star votes to the least. The top row five badges will return the first challenge week we fill the grid with 50 bloggers. For this week, because the grid had 29 entries, the array highlights the top row three.
In the case of a tie, the thumbnails are additionally sorted by page views. Do not be discouraged if your blog has landed near the bottom of the grid; it is always a tight race. The fun lies in getting better exposure for your blog and in the spirit of competition as incentive to improve your writing and blogging skills. It’s a win-win for everybody involved.
Thanks again, everybody, for linking up, for reading, for voting. And for making yeah write the most welcoming spot on the Interwebs for writers who blog and bloggers who write.
With Deb Williams as the guest editor, yeah write #69 prompts will be published Monday, and the grid will open Tuesday.
Kristin, I feel the same; lots of noteworthy entries this week. I loved how Dude of the House’s post was such a sad-but-sweet departure from his usual style, loved that someone who’s not me told a dog story (thanks @WriteRinseBlog for making me feel like less of a weirdo), that Christie had the imagination to write from a doll’s point of view and that Kellie’s World let us in on the very beginning of his love story with Kellie. And so much more. Thanks to all the editors for keeping us going; I’m challenging myself to stay with the 500-word limit even when it goes up to 1,000 because it trims the fat off my writing like nothing else. We’re listening, Erica.
Wow! I feel like Gabby Douglas this morning… Thank you so very much!
I did want to clear up a point, though — I have never had cancer (you’re going to make me give my prize back now, huh?). I had an ectopic pregnancy that was finally “dissolved” using a chemo drug. As sucky as that was, it was nowhere near as traumatizing and difficult as having cancer.
I agree with Kristin — I am so excited to read these entries the last couple of weeks because everyone has grown so much. I am proud to be included into this group and am continually amaze at the talent it attracts.
Good on ya for helping us stretch and good on us for rising to the challenge every week! I cannot wait to see what comes to the table in the next round!
Thanks for the clarification, Courteney. It doesn’t make the impact any less, that’s for sure.
Congrats Courteney! Congrats Louise!
Not to take away from the well-deserved wins, but I have to admit to being bummed when the mentions converge on one or two people – there were so many I thought were outstanding. And I know this sounds ridiculous, but it’s really too early to be up, so I’ll just say it: I’m excited (dare I say proud?) to see all the wickedly pointed improvements in so many people.
The professional-grade writers are consistent, and the emerging writers are catching up. Love to see the progress.