Running Lines: Editing on the Micro-Level
Let’s talk about sentences and the words that make up your sentences.
Because y’all have now mastered the high-level editing we talked about in the first two installments of our February nonfiction know-how, right? You understand developmental editing – choosing your literary conflict and pruning it down to fit your post size? You’re good with structural editing – deciding the order in which your story is going to unfold?
It’s time to think small. This week, I’m going to give a mini-lesson on line editing. Line editing is all about making sure the words you’ve chosen and the way you’ve arranged them into sentences conveys your mood and meaning and, most of all, moves your story forward fluidly. There’s room for style and individual voice, of course, but there are also some general rules to help you get started that will definitely benefit your work.
New paragraphs: You’ll want to start a new paragraph whenever you have a change in scene, speaker, setting, time, or point of view. You can also start new short paragraphs or even single sentence paragraphs to emphasize something in your plot, which slows down the pacing and adds tension and suspense.
Sentence structure: That’s what syntax is, simply put: The way you construct your sentences. Do you use a lot of clauses? Sentence fragments? The key here is variety. You don’t want all your sentences to have the same basic structure and length because that becomes a droning sing-song in your reader’s ear. What happens then? No information stands out, so your meaning gets lost in the rhythmic cadence.
The best words: It’s easy in a first draft to grab the easiest verbs (go, be, have, get, take, etc.) and simplest nouns, then to load up on adjectives and adverbs to help them out. Your job during the line edit is to isolate the words that convey your precise meaning. And that, in a nutshell, is the difference between showing and telling. When you choose more specific verbs, you might find you don’t need those adverbs after all. And when you use more specific nouns or even noun phrases, you might discover that you’ve just painted a much clearer picture for your reader. Example? You could call something a bird, or a chickadee, or a black-capped harbinger of winter. Think about what you want to convey – sometimes the bird alone is enough if it’s not all that important to your plot, but sometimes you’ll benefit from the more lyrical phrase if your bird is symbolic or otherwise essential to your scene.
So dig deep this week. I want you to think about every word, every sentence, and every paragraph, as well as how those sentences and paragraphs flow together. I also want you to revisit the line editing section of Rowan’s opening February post on editing, which contains even more tips for you to consider. When you’re done, you’ll have completed a thorough line edit and your work will be that much closer to grid-ready.
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This month’s nonfiction know-how is a little bit of a throwback. We’ve spent a lot of time lately talking about how to get writing that appeals to your audience onto the page; for Valentine’s Day we’re going to remind you how to show your writing a little additional love. Editing. It’s a task that makes the best of us cringe. We’ve talked about it before, and this month Cindy and Rowan are going to walk you through some specifics with the nonfiction posts and roundups. So what is editing, anyway, and how is it different from writing? Learn more from Rowan here.
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